Wednesday, March 14, 2012

By the Beach Side

The sun is slowly closing its eyes,

and the moon seems to have already arrived.

I still sit there immersed in my own thoughts,

Thinking about him by the beach side.

The cascading waves across the shore invite me,

To enjoy with them an amusing little ride.

They tell me to let go off all burden and be free to decide,

But I am waiting still for him by the beach side.

Irked, I throw a pebble into the blue, and the water forms new designs,

Trying to pacify me, the water seems to trick off my mind.

There I can see his reflection bit by bit appearing and dissolving over.

But yet, this longing for him makes my feelings go even more lower.

I write his name on the lovely white sand,

But the marine wipes it off with its hands…

The wind brings along a swift message for me,

Your love is here, he is just behind me.

(CONTINUED .......By the Beach Side-Part 2 ~ its my life)

Copyright ©2012 by Elvira Lobo- Its My Life
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Disclaimer: The image(s) in the post are taken from Google. I don't claim any of its rights.


  1. Wow!
    I fell for this-"I throw a pebble into the blue, and the water forms new designs," Gives an idea of a beautiful imagery ,doesn't it!?! :)

    And I'm waiting for "to be continued..." ;)

  2. thanx Jen for ur kind words...and beautiful imagery...thanx a lot for ur encouragement....

    I'm too waiting to let the ink flow through the words...

  3. And you turn around to find him standing right there, for you.... wow! what a moment it'd have been...?! ;) i hope that's how it happened or would be penned down in your continuing post... ;)

  4. What a beautiful poem. I loved the first and the last paragraph...:)

  5. @rPhoenix-smiles:P....thanx a lot and u can catch up with continued post-:)
    was busy...sorry for late reply:)

  6. @Saru Singhal- Thank u very very much....m a big fan of ur versatile writings;)


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