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Friday, January 27, 2012

Short Verse- Blood Relations


He smiled,

His brother lay covered with blood,

Split emotions.



Copyright ©2012 by Elvira Lobo- Its My Life
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Disclaimer: The image(s) in the post are taken from Google. I don't claim any of its rights.

6 comments:

  1. WoW! That's a powerful haiku, Elvira! Perfect image too :-) Do you follow the 5-7-5 syllable count haiku or is there a different pattern? I've only written a few so I'm curious :-)

    I am sure that I followed your blog, yet I'm not in your GFC list :( Will join again to make sure. Sorry about the confusion. Thanks for your nice comments at my blog. :-)

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  2. Thanks Fiona for ur kind appreciation:)

    I know of 5-7-5 syllable count haiku but i follow my own pattern :-)

    And may be there was some site error....now u can see urslf as a member:)

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  3. Hello Elvira.
    There is something very sinister & dark about this Haiku.
    You expressed it very well.
    Thanks for sharing & for all your visits. Your kindness has been appreciated.

    Please stop by my blog when you get a chance. I have a special surprise for you here...

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  4. Hey very powerful Haiku. Congratulation on the award given by Andy David.

    http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.in/2012/02/dark-desire.html

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  5. @ Andy- Thanx for ur kind words and happy dat u liked it:)

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