Tuesday, January 24, 2012

The Other Mermaid

His words struck her like a wave,
She thought he had turned naive.
Her tears were just a drop in the ocean,
For him, it was only emotion.
Their relation was turning into a tsunami,
The high tide was causing disharmony.
Another Mermaid had taken over his heart,
He wanted this friendship to thwart.
They were together since little,
How could he behave so belittle.
In anger, she just swam away,
Near the shell, she went and lay.
How could he do this, she felt,
" You are only Mine !!!", she Yelled.
He winked at her and smiled,
It was a prank, he had lied.
The ocean was silent for a flash,
Hahaha!!!,He was now gonna pay for creating a hash.

Published in the book -"INKLINKSby Poets Corner Group. 

Copyright ©2012 by Elvira Lobo- Its My Life
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  1. Hello Elvira.
    I like the playfulness of this poem.
    Nice imagery too.
    Thanks for sharing.
    Thanks also for following my blog. I always try to return the kindness & have become your newest follower too. I hope you will visit often & soon! (smile).

    Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn

  2. Thanks Andy....i have already visited ur blog:)

  3. Hi Elvira :)

    Very nice writing! I enjoyed this one!

    Thanks for coming to visit my site and become my new reader *big smiles* I also appreciate your nice comments ~ thank you :)

    Best Wishes to you in your writing, life and building a broader following :)

  4. Hi *Princesa Fiona*~,
    Thanks so much for ur kind wishes:)

  5. superb especially the climax! nice play of word:)

  6. Elvira this is beautiful. ThanQ for the presence n love u left on my blog. Matters so much. Keep sharing, joined u as well..:)


  7. @Mani-hi,Thanx for lykg this poem and joining as a follower too:)

  8. @Venjace- Thanks a lot for liking it and wonderful words and also visiting Its My Life;)


@ ITS MY really matters :)


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